2018 Right place at the right time 2018

Kia ora In room 3 we are learning to be at the right place at the right time and that means to make sure we are learning at learning time.

Bridges

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Me and my friends Kayla and Bree did a slide about bridges we went and saw the bridge there making near our school.

I am poem

I am a kaimanawa horse

I wonder what’s the common distance of my gallop

I hear all the birds singing in the woods

I see as far as the ocean

I want to be the best I can be

I am amazing in everthing

I pretend that I’m a supersonic horse in a speedy race

I feel the wind fighting against me as I gallop

I touch the drenched grass underneath my hooves as I run

I worry I will get sick in this numbing cold

I cry I wont make it in the cold

I am fearless and strong

I understand that I can be mean

I say to myself be brave       

I dream I’m flying through the clouds

I try to be strong, tough, kind and the best I can be.

I hope My family finds me but for now I'm all alone
I am bolt

Reversibilty, dont subtract, add.

This is what we have been doing in room three

and for me it has made maths a lot easier.  We have been practising the strategy reversibility  - don't subtract add.

(The Math Problem)

Teone saves $536 to buy a new dvd player . The dvd player is $899.

How much does Teone need to save up to buy a dvd player.

   $536 + $363 =$899            $899 - $363 = $536. 

Mysterious girl

The Mysterious Girl.
There was a girl called Evie. She was an only child and she was living with her mum because her dad moved out when Evie was two years old. Her Mum had a secret . She was hiding from Evie for a long time….

Evie and her mum aren't ordinary people. They are from a world called Mythical Blue. She and her mum moved to Mythical Blue when Evie was little because Evie’s mum didn't feel safe in the real world. 

They had a house in Mythical Blue and it was called the tree of life and they lived inside the trunk and the trees leafs dangled down to the ground. The trunk of the tree had an orange eye on it and you would go up to the eye and it would tell you in your mind the answer to your problem. 

When Evie was little and they moved to Mythical Blue Evie found a bunny.
The bunny had a bell around her neck. So Evie called her Bell and ever since that has been Evies best friend. 

One day Bell the bunny and Evie went for a walk in the enchanted forest and they saw a little bag hanging on a tree branch so they grabbed it off the branch and sat down with it and opened it. It was pixie dust….. 
They didn't know what to do with it and so they took it home and showed Evie's mum. In the Mythical Blue world pixie dust is really rare to be continued  

                                           The End.
Whaea robs feed back

This is a lovely mystery narrative. I’m looking forward to finding out what is going to happen next.

Next steps - Capital letters for names (aka proper nouns).

Increasing impact on the reader by using sentences of varied length.

Whaea rob

All About Me

Hi my name is Darby and I'm in room 3 and a year 5.
I go to Waitohu School.
My favourite sport is horse riding, swimming and skating
My favourite animal is a horse And I have been doing horse riding for three years.
My favourite colour is blue and orange.
My favourite movies are Harry Potter.
My favourite books are Harry Potter.